A Winter Without You

A Winter Without You

A Poem by w
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Haiku

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A gray day closes
as white falls on the dead grass
the stone reads "forgiven"

© 2012 w


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this feels like a very cold winter
=]

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short but powerful! Tells a lot, thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not to sound utterly stupid, but I didn't quite get the punchline...
Your poem is so beautiful, I would love it if you would tell me what the last line means

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

w

11 Years Ago

That in the end everything is forgiven and nothing bad matters anymore.
Blue Ivory

11 Years Ago

Oh. Wow that's a really nice way to imply it!
Ciao,

This is sad but great. The only thing that I noticed is that you said it's haiku but the last line has six syllables. Other than that this was really good.

Arrivederci!

Posted 11 Years Ago


short but deep, well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aw, even being a haiku, the meaning of this, despite the length, dug pretty deep. I like haikus and think I should start writing them more. My father tells me that writing poems is a great exercise for writing novels and short stories, because they force you to express a lot of meaning with few words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


w

11 Years Ago

I can't seem to write more than a few sentences anymore, so I think I will stick to poetry. :) Thank.. read more
C.A. Lucas

11 Years Ago

My pleasure.

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