Temptress

Part of it's a vivid dream...part of it's fantasy...And...I guess all of it is impossible...

Seduction painted

A bold, crimson warning

Across Her face

In Her smile

I read the signs,

But couldn’t react

Not against my current captivation…

Her in my mind

Cascading dark curls

Green eyes shinning bright

Into mine

Lighting desire

I wished to hide

Deliberately swaying

Her hips toward mine

Her eyes dancing wild

Burning like fire

Her hands caressing

Erasing the time

Escape becomes a distant hope

Surrender to my Temptress

Explore this forbidden act

Ignore the cautions along the way

Dare to take a risk

Give in to this…kiss

Let Her overwhelm my senses

With Her invigorating flavor

Craving the touch of skin to skin

Her skin to mine

My breath catches inside

Her scent fills me

A drug in disguise

Seeping in and shutting down

My defenses

Pulling me closer

Holding me tightly in its clutches

And I’m giving in to Her

Reaching out to Her

My Temptress

Tonight…I am free

Tonight I am Hers…

Forever

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

So vividly and visually sensual
my head exploded, nicely done!

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"Seduction painted

A bold, crimson warning

Across Her face" ~ An enticing beginning, definitely captured my attention. Your expressions are romantic, tantalizing; ending nicely with sweet surrender.

[Flow]

I would have called this one "The Ache" because you captured that wanting feeling that we get when in the presence of a Temptress, I love your transitions here, how the last word of the sentence hindges onto the next line. Very easy read, easy to find the tempo of your style. Excellent write..

[Legion]

Another nice fantasy. :)