Intuition

Intuition

A Poem by Michelle N. H.

There is a butterfly

With wings of glass

Blue as the ocean or

The heavens when

Uncovered by clouds

There is a butterfly

With an icy stare

That instantly pins me

To her heart

And with her

A twinkling sound as

She flutters before me

Whilst leaving a trail

Of crystals amid

A snowy landscape

For me to behold

And carefully tread

As she pours a whisper

Into the air for

The wind to carry

Forward and be felt


© 2015 Michelle N. H.



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Michelle N. H.

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I have penned a piece with a concept of a butterfly as a token of friendship . This piece made me convinced that it is a perfect piece . I have read many authors who are gifted with free verse . This one equals, if not, rivals even the best out there . By no stretch of imagination that there are selected few who could write like this . And if english is not their primary language then I'm convinced that it transcends race, creed, academic, and geographical advantage . The nationality of the author is a mystery to me . But I have a hunch that english wasn't her primary language . Then and only then her poetry skills is a gift from beyond . I'm awe struck with this piece . What I could not achieve became possible here .

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I have penned a piece with a concept of a butterfly as a token of friendship . This piece made me convinced that it is a perfect piece . I have read many authors who are gifted with free verse . This one equals, if not, rivals even the best out there . By no stretch of imagination that there are selected few who could write like this . And if english is not their primary language then I'm convinced that it transcends race, creed, academic, and geographical advantage . The nationality of the author is a mystery to me . But I have a hunch that english wasn't her primary language . Then and only then her poetry skills is a gift from beyond . I'm awe struck with this piece . What I could not achieve became possible here .

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a stunning poem. Beautiful in form and in spirit. Very abstract and yes enchanting.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Joshua :)
Very sweet and enchanting poem! I love the symbol of butterfly and the way you draw it here is wonderful. It takes me to another place of dreams, of moments, which are not illusions in our heart. Beautifully written, it gives feeling of freedom, gentleness, transience and eternity, butterfly will fade, but the memory of her wings remains. My favorite lines:

She flutters before me

Whilst leaving a trail

Of crystals amid

A snowy landscape


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

3 Years Ago

Thanks :) I wanted to write a fantasy poem concerning itself around an enchanting world, but the wor.. read more
I love the taste of dancing... here...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Chris. :)
Chris

3 Years Ago

well you were ...dancing... here - inside.
I always know when I've found an amazing poem. I can start half reading it then suddenly I go still as the beautiful words touch my heart. This was more then one of these poems. There's something incredibly special in this write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

3 Years Ago

Those a really big words. It means much to me that you think highly of this poem. Thank you, PurpleQ.. read more
I 100% agree with my fellow writer Scott Metro review.... respect

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
A glimpse into your lovely heart.
The real beauty is not in the butterfly..but in the describer.

Admiration.
Scott

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

3 Years Ago

Thank you kindly x I believe we all possess that beauty of the butterfly, an inner guiding voice. So.. read more
Scott Metro

3 Years Ago

Indeed....
Scotty
I love how this poems sings to me as I read it. Very nicely penned Michelle.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Jack :) It means a great deal.
Wonderful read, very beautiful :) x

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

3 Years Ago

I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, Tia ^^ Thanks.
I just think you are that beautiful butterfly Michelle, your intuition lays right before you... ;) and is so great, always. You have feelers... a great serene metaphor here, whimsical winter beauty. Thank you dear.

- Elisa

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

You're ever so welcome Michelle, I love your writings. :)
Michelle N. H.

3 Years Ago

That really means a lot to me. You know, I love yours :)

3 Years Ago

Thank you for saying that also sweet woman :)

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Michelle N. H.

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I'm Michelle. To strangers I may seem reluctant, but I'm really quite open towards those that are patient and genuinely interested in getting to know me. I think a lot. I'm hardly ever bored. I've.. more..

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