In the arms of

In the arms of

A Poem by Michelle N. H.

I try to breathe

In the bubble of

Our creation

To feel what it is to be living

I know I love you

But you let go

When we dance

I fall to the floor

And memories from the past are

Far beyond the sun

I cry

In the arms of pretending

© 2018 Michelle N. H.


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Michelle N. H.

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I love the way you presented this. It's like a slow dance into depression but it's something beautiful to experience. My review may come across cynical but I promise you it's far from it, I truly found beauty in the sadness of her loneliness for she expressed it so well, like a masterpiece of sorts. As if it was her cross to bear but her gift to the world.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Words arranged in such a way that they are given life and feeling. The definitions for the word “poetry” are endless, but here you have created a perfect example of it. Thank you! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is beautifully sad... I love it! This is my first poem of yours I've read... I found a new awesome writer :) Consider me a fan :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A sad vision of a lost love..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 26, 2015
Last Updated on November 7, 2018
Tags: love, illusion, fantasy, pretence, fear, blinded, caged, circle, stepping forward

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Michelle N. H.
Michelle N. H.

Denmark



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I'm Michelle. To strangers I may seem reluctant, but I'm really quite open towards those that are patient and genuinely interested in getting to know me. I think a lot. I'm hardly ever bored. I've.. more..

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