The Rose who defied the sun

The Rose who defied the sun

A Poem by Rivaxorus
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When do the signs decide our love?

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When do the signs decide our love
When does society approve of our hearts
If two people can be unhappy together
Why can't two people be happy together

There was a rose once
Who fell in love with the moon
It defied the sun
Because for all it's worth

There's only one single thing we can trust
It's ourselves
To oppose
And to think in harmony

So what next
What do we do now
As a human being
Do we defy the sun?

© 2013 Rivaxorus


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Oh wow this was great Seimei, it held awesome wording and the way you used the sun in it, was out standing. My favorite part o this is the last sentance. "Do we defy the sun?" That is a good question indeed. We are trapped by the way society thinks we should love, and most of us have different views on that. So to answer your question stated in that sentance, YEs we do defy the sun, and maybe one day the sun will let us choose our own path with out being ridiculed.
~Your firend Res

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Rivaxorus

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much ^w^



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I like the comparison of the rose to human beings, each one beautiful in its own way.. but obstacles and thorns restrict happiness.. Good write, I enjoyed it :) Keep writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rivaxorus

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much ^w^
Oh wow this was great Seimei, it held awesome wording and the way you used the sun in it, was out standing. My favorite part o this is the last sentance. "Do we defy the sun?" That is a good question indeed. We are trapped by the way society thinks we should love, and most of us have different views on that. So to answer your question stated in that sentance, YEs we do defy the sun, and maybe one day the sun will let us choose our own path with out being ridiculed.
~Your firend Res

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rivaxorus

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much ^w^

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Rivaxorus
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Apple Valley, CA



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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..

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