Of Eye Contact... (That Summer Anthologies #2)

Of Eye Contact... (That Summer Anthologies #2)

A Story by Sela
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Meeting a person through his eyes can be rather interesting.

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I'll start this little story telling you about the time I was basking in the sun on this little Island, alright not so little rather a normal-sized one, there I was when I laid eyes on this guy not much older than me, 2 year or so. We began this "eye contact competition" How does that work? You see, it was something like this...

     

     Every now and then our eyes will meet and we would catch each other's eyes and stare until one looked away, yeah it wasn't exactly like that but you get what we were trying to complish. It was actually quite funny if you looked at it from another’s POV or as in right now, I look back in time and think it was hilarious.

 

      We started this so called silent competition, where either I would turn and look at him until he turned his head to meet my eyes or I will seek him out and find him already staring at me, it went on and on… until the day we were at decent speaking-to-each-other distance, he introduced himself we talked for 5 minutes top, exchanged numbers, that was it… what can I say? It wasn’t as fun as locking eyes from a distance, meaning exactly what you might think: a love match didn’t come out of it; rather, a weird friendship the last time I saw him, we were on the same ship heading home still I felt like I knew him, even when we didn’t quite talk a lot or knew a thing about each other those stares said something, that words couldn’t.

 

       Half a year later, we were still talking or texting, like a said already a strange friendship came out of it, we didn’t actually have much in common and lived a couple of towns too far. But that summer had an interesting appeal that I’ll always remember, and I put that eye contact thingy to practise later on. The second time I used that super power, I did manage to put it to real good use and actually get something out of it but I’ll always recall when I first did that and how incredibly fun it was.

 

         Sometimes I think how weird or bizarre it would be to go back to that Island and find him there again, it would be the coincidence to match all coincidences but at least it would bring good memories. If you can go back to a time and place where something like that happened and you thought it was this amazing, risk-free thing which had you being happy and all, wouldn’t you want to go there? Life can become a bit complicated when you grow up but when you’re young, you believe you own the world… that’s definitely something we owe not to lose.


© 2014 Sela



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