Oh, woman!

to all women concerned

Glorious descendant of Eve.

Creature shaped after Adam.

Blessed with beauty.

Blessed with heart.

What insult!

What woe to self you inflict!

Degrading.

Detestable.

Inhuman.

Sacred flesh

you now cheaply expose,

feasted upon

by eyes void of chastity.

Unlawful acts

you shamelessly conduct

to satiate

carnal pleasures

to gain

fleeting approval of men.

Take caution.

Gain wisdom.

Redeem your honor!

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Wow!!!
Powerful!!!
to the point and perfect: not a word more, not a word less!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Al R. Arce]

The beginning of your poem just made me realize something... The reason women are so perfect is because God used man to practice and, thus, made all his mistakes with him...

[BlackHeart]

There is great wisdom here and it reach's into people. It touch's a lot of people, and connects quite a bit as well. Great job on this piece.

[MsJewel]

There is truth and wisdom to your words my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Jennie Baron]

Very well said. This is sadly the tale for too many women and I agree with the values expressed.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Although I do not entirely agree with whatever you have written here...but I like the way you have written it. The flow of the poem is quite good and the content is strong. Good work!

[Angel]

Oh woman...and oh, man, as well. Sadly, seven out of ten women will be sexually molested at some point in their lives...and it isn't the same pervert running from town to town, my friend...it is men. And we aren't necessarily talking about women in revealing clothing with more make up than Bozo, but decent women who are doing nothing but minding their own business.
Don't blame it all on women, my friend. Gain wisdom, and realize...it takes two.

[Inda]

A tale of caution told beautifully!

[Latifa]

I love it , soo true your words need to be heard by every woman on planet earth
great job darling soo honest.

[Twizzler]

Very opinionated...we need more voices like yours! Good Job!

[Blue]

Thank you, Twizzler!