The Guys I've Loved Before

The Guys I've Loved Before

A Poem by Blue
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summarized sentiments

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Marjon was my first grade crush
To see him play, I'd be in rush
I liked his smile and wits between
Too bad he liked my friend Regine.

Gerald's the boy who played board games
Proud, arrogant; I called him names
Choc'lates, roses, "Will you be mine?"
I turned him down that Valentine.

Ahl was famous, he lived next door
He gave letters, laughters, and more
Handsome and smart; he was okay
Two weeks later, he showed up gay.

Kenneth's charming, first love was he
We were so sure we're meant to be
Ours was magic, thrilling, and fun
We knew too late the spark was gone.

John's my senior and brother true
He loved me, oh, he loved her, too
Our sweet affair, the saddest bye
Last time we met, he watched me cry.

Patrick's a jerk, the worst of all
Heaven of hell, song of my soul
Of love's mem'ries, his was the best
But he broke me, just like the rest.

The glorious past of former flames
Unfolded by this list of names
When love's a risk, when love's a chance
I'll take a look, I'll take a glance.


© 2014 Blue



Author's Note

Blue
Original link: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/arzeljoy_blu/1231293/

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The story this tells is so enjoyable. Fantastic! and you have a nice flow and musicality to boot! I would take it this is taken from experience, but whether it was or not, this is brilliantly absurd in a number of places. Well done!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Blue

3 Months Ago

Wow, your comments on my old poems are heartwarming. Thank you so much!
emipoemi

3 Months Ago

The pleasure was all mine.
beautifully done kabayan... hilarity and seriousness at the same time... Enjoyed reading it from start to end because you have a lovely rhyme...

Posted 4 Months Ago


i love it , very well written good job Blue

Posted 7 Months Ago


very entertaining piece my friend, i enjoyed reading
it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


I'm getting a lot of mixed emotions..
Very fast paced.. :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


"When love's a risk, when love's a chance
I'll take a look, I'll take a glance."
Interesting lines...
Btw this felt to me a lot like experimenting with boys lol 😂😂
Nice reading it ☺

Posted 10 Months Ago


This is so good. I like this. They can be related by a lot of people. I love the ending, taking a look, or taking a glance. This is usually what leads to falling in love with someone. It also leads to heartbreak, if your heart is deceived. Wonderful work!

~LG

Posted 10 Months Ago


ahahaha i love this poem and commiserate with its protagonist .. its a long and winding road says the Beatles song .. and rocky too says i! ;))) enjoyed reading this poem from a young heart.
E.

Posted 10 Months Ago


awesome ......................................

Posted 1 Year Ago


I like this one a lot, and it has a light, devil may care attitude befitting a strong young woman.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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