Pieces

Pieces

A Poem by Blue
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...of you.

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Pieces



The paper airplanes on the floor,

The noiseless closing of the door,

The cave-like drawing on the wall,

And no more bouncing basketball.

 

The scattered books beside the chair,

The shoes atop each other’s pair,

The poster of your favorite band,

And unwashed shirt of costly brand.

 

The candy wrapper on the pane,

The pillow with a chocolate stain,

The messy room, the unmade bed,

And robot with a missing head.

 

That morning, none confessed a sign

That luck was surely out of line.

Before you left, before the bus,

You left your pieces here with us.

 


© 2014 Blue



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Be-yond words!! Out! of! this! world!! solemn, sublime, and spectacular! Absolutely fantastic! Well done!

Posted 4 Months Ago


The words flow very well! Sad but charming too. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


wow are you gifted....this is brilliantly penned. just brilliant!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Blue

3 Years Ago

Mark, thank you so much!
I love the uses of imagery.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Blue

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Anika!
This rather melancholy poem describes the reminders left behind by loss. It flows well and the descriptions are so accurate and apt.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Blue

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, John!
John Alexander McFadyen

3 Years Ago

My pleasure.
This is very real. A little random too....but thats why i like it! Nice.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Blue

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Blogger!
Blogger

3 Years Ago

You did well! Keep writing.
Very detailing poem which creates a perfect imagery of just everything :) very intellectual write! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Blue

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Kale!
I don´t know what to say.. it was genius, I sat there wishing I wrote it it was just so good! you have lots lots of talent, and this just proves it.. amazing piece, loved the rhyme, everything about it.. the picture you created in our minds when we read it.. added to my favorites, just amazing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Blue

3 Years Ago

Johanna, your reviews always lift up my spirits. Thanks a lot!
Splendid superb poem, lovely to read and so meaningful.............................. loved it.


Posted 3 Years Ago


Blue

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
A great, sweet poem, about the loss of childhood. Keep on writing :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Blue

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Jay!

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