I Thought Like Fools Do in Grief

I Thought Like Fools Do in Grief

A Poem by Bluest Blue

It did not rain that fateful day
Your love was like the sun at noon
But without warning, all was dark
The sky turned starless, midnight soon.


I thought like fools do in grief:
"If day is short, then midnight's brief."


To bed I went with hopes of dawn
I lulled my pain, regrets to sleep
Forever passed and night stayed on
The sky's still starless, black, and deep.


I thought like fools do in grief:
"If love is short, then sorrow's brief."


© 2015 Bluest Blue



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This is excellent. So heartbreaking and true and so well put in such a few simple words. Well done indeed.

Posted 4 Months Ago


In faith, dear poet, your rhymes are gold!
Your imagery and flow are bold!
You have the will, the skill, the thrill–
A true magician with the quill!!

Well done!

Posted 4 Months Ago


It's amazingly sad and true and thank you Blue. :) You knocked it out of the park with this write, its great, it flows great and the words are powerful. Keep on writing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


A beautiful poem, very well written and presented.

Posted 1 Year Ago


A poignant truth. Very well constructed, I thank you for this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


That last line was perfect, i like the tone of this poem a lot also, nice job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Well constructed - lyrical and sad. Well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


gave me chills
amazing piece

Posted 2 Years Ago


I can't quite tell if I have chills or I'm about to cry. Your form is stellar and the substance is so powerful and true it hurts.

Posted 2 Years Ago


You will always be one of my best poet!!!! BLUE

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Bluest Blue
Bluest Blue

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Hi, there! I don't know who I really am but let's start with my name. I am Arzel Joy, otherwise known as Blue here in WC. I have more pressing matters at hand so I have reduced my time spent on th.. more..

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