Long Distance Fairytale

Long Distance Fairytale

A Poem by Blue

It hurts to wonder from afar
What you're doing, how you are
You used to tell me, now there's none
To say because you're good as gone.


I'll stop waiting by the phone
Accept you're never coming home
I'll take your pictures off my wall
We should have listened after all.


A love like this is doomed to fail
Skype long distance fairytale
Might have lasted had we met
Before time taught us to forget.


© 2015 Blue



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Long distance relationship is not so easy since both of you have to pass different tests which require trust and loyalty.
It's normal to cry when the one you love has given up, but you have to accept that he's not the one deserving so you have to move on.
So moving.
Keep writing, sis!

Posted 2 Years Ago


The belief, that love will blossom, conquer all no matter what, is so often dashed on the rocks of indifference, but it's harder to walk away that keep hoping.

Such a telling line, 'Skype long distance fairytale,' and the rhyming throughout is impeccable.

Beccy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


What a fantastic write, Blue.

You captured the emotions well in this one. I too, have had online relationships and none of them have ever worked out. I felt hopeful every time, I'm not sure if it was because I am so naive. I have now forgotten most of them, except for one. I don't think I will ever be able to forget him.

Though I hope I do, and soon.

Thank you for sharing a part of yourself with us.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Blue

2 Years Ago

I'm pleased you can relate to this, Clara. My previous relationship was LDR and it lasted for two ye.. read more
wow A...what a sad poem indeed and the saddest part is that i totally understand exactly where you are coming from. i can relate so much to these words right here. i have tried so many of these long distances and at the end of it all,,there is always a heartbreak awaiting me. but foolish little me, i always hope for a different outcome each time. lovely poem, well put together, beautiful words and altogether...perfecto.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Blue

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Cycy! I missed you! I'll be reading your poems tomorrow. :)
cycy

2 Years Ago

ayti hunny :) :)
Oh I have been in a couple of these relationships and know of what you speak of.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Blue

2 Years Ago

I'm glad you can relate to the experiences I speak of. I wish the best for your relationship. :)
Very well written and v thoughtful

Posted 2 Years Ago


A sad look at long distance romances, well worded and written, another wonderfully painful poem. You certainly are a master of the sad poems, Blue. You express what a lot of us feel (or have felt), so please keep being a voice for all of us. It is an absolute joy to read your poems.

Posted 2 Years Ago


with long distance relationships, eventually....time does teach us to forget...been in a few...result seems to be the same each time.

a very sad tale with no happy ending.

j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I've been in this situation many times when it comes to online relationships. Always thinking it'd work out through the computer cause the communication was good. Everything seems good, then it ends sooner than expected. Not all online relationships last, only few do, but they last cause both people are putting in the right amount of effort. It's hard work, I tell ya. Great realization.,

Posted 2 Years Ago


broke my heart. Nice job! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Tags: ldr, long distance, relationship, love, heartbreak, heartache, moving on

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