Go on, daydream

stories sleep in space

words wait by the window

watch and they wake

stare and they show

creatures out of their cage

fly and fill up the page

Author's Note

image not mine

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

sometimes its better not to stare ;) how many times did me Ma tell me "its not polite to stare" :))) Creatures can spring forth with a paralyzing terror .. one must be careful says i!
simple straight forward language but very inspiring and meaningful ... and i like how one can go both ways with it ... the imaging of your first verse is delightful ..especially for those who write and strive to write .. nice one Bluesy
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[wordman]

words from heaven
to fill your soul,
transfered to a poets pen
to bring joys un known

[Blue]

Right! thanks, wordman!

[wordman]

my pleasure

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think this is how i write..the creatures come, i capture them, momentarily, and then they disappear and i am left with some words....i never know where anything comes from that i write.

[Blue]

Haha, lucky you that they come to you. I hunt them as they hardly pass my way. Lol

[emipoemi]

...........Go on daydreamer..........dream on!!

no words can describe the power that this gives off! I was enchanted. The feeling and energy seemed to go by too fast.....like I feel just one more couplet- or two lines that play with the third pair like the first two pairs play with each other- would help the denouement of the power. Just something to think about. For on the whole this is marvellous! It could still work on its own, depending on how it's read, but every device and implement used to craft this gem is brilliant! Well freaking done!

[Blue]

Emi, you have no idea how much your comment lightened me up. I was feeling down just seconds ago. Thank you very much!

[emipoemi]

Hey, I'm actually a big fan of your work! Thank YOU for sharing. You are a true poet, if I ever read one!

[Blue]

My jaw just dropped. NO KIDDING.