Go on, daydream

Go on, daydream

A Poem by Bluest Blue


stories sleep in space
words wait by the window

watch and they wake
stare and they show



creatures out of their cage
fly and fill up the page

© 2018 Bluest Blue



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Bluest Blue
image not mine

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sometimes its better not to stare ;) how many times did me Ma tell me "its not polite to stare" :))) Creatures can spring forth with a paralyzing terror .. one must be careful says i!
simple straight forward language but very inspiring and meaningful ... and i like how one can go both ways with it ... the imaging of your first verse is delightful ..especially for those who write and strive to write .. nice one Bluesy
E.

Posted 8 Months Ago


words from heaven
to fill your soul,
transfered to a poets pen
to bring joys un known

Posted 8 Months Ago


Bluest Blue

8 Months Ago

Right! thanks, wordman!
 wordman

8 Months Ago

my pleasure
i think this is how i write..the creatures come, i capture them, momentarily, and then they disappear and i am left with some words....i never know where anything comes from that i write.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Bluest Blue

8 Months Ago

Haha, lucky you that they come to you. I hunt them as they hardly pass my way. Lol
...........Go on daydreamer..........dream on!!

no words can describe the power that this gives off! I was enchanted. The feeling and energy seemed to go by too fast.....like I feel just one more couplet- or two lines that play with the third pair like the first two pairs play with each other- would help the denouement of the power. Just something to think about. For on the whole this is marvellous! It could still work on its own, depending on how it's read, but every device and implement used to craft this gem is brilliant! Well freaking done!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Bluest Blue

8 Months Ago

Emi, you have no idea how much your comment lightened me up. I was feeling down just seconds ago. Th.. read more
emipoemi

8 Months Ago

Hey, I'm actually a big fan of your work! Thank YOU for sharing. You are a true poet, if I ever read.. read more
Bluest Blue

8 Months Ago

My jaw just dropped. NO KIDDING.

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Bluest Blue
Bluest Blue

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Hi, there! I don't know who I really am but let's start with my name. I am Arzel Joy, otherwise known as Blue here in WC. I have more pressing matters at hand so I have reduced my time spent on th.. more..

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