Someone

Someone

A Poem by Sam

So you've been knocked down
You've been beaten and been shoved
Maybe all you wear is a frown
And you've never felt truly loved.
Life isn't quite what you had imagined
It's hard to stand on your feet
Your bruised and blackened
And felling like you've been beat,
Your struggling to survive
In this crazy hectic place
It's a miracle you just that your alive.
Even if you feel misplaced
remember your not alone
There is always someone out there
Who's waiting by the phone
Their wishing you were near
And their wishing you where home

© 2017 Sam



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Sam
What did you think of it, did you think the ending was to abrupt?

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Wow, a poem with such emotions swirling around, explained delicately...
The rhymes were paced and made sense!
Well done Sam, I really liked this piece!
The ending wasn't abrupt
Keep it up

Posted 4 Months Ago


Sam

4 Months Ago

Thank you!! :)
Mr.Writer

4 Months Ago

No problem

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Hi my name is M. Sam Teague every just calls Sam. I'm a student by day and a writer by... well whenever I get time. My hobbies include anything from sitting in bed all day to rock climbing and skiing more..

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