They

I wrote this. :/ What more do you want me to say?

They met on a writing site.

 

They talked all day and night

 

He asked her out, she said no.

 

Then he asked her again, and no.

 

Finally the girl said yes, and I’m sure

 

They dated for a while. Just a big pile.

 

He showed her his love, told her his fears

 

His wishes, his dreams and tears.

 

She hated him but loved some other

 

He was right down rude and stubborn

 

Well she dated the guy, she did another

 

Neither guy knew the other must suffer

 

Then one day she called her true lover

 

I’m sorry to say, I think we are way over

 

The guy felt his heart, and she smiled

 

I’m with someone better, she nattered

 

She gave her second lover her love

 

While the first still weeps from her shove

It’s been over a year, if not two

 

She’s still with her lover, oh brother.

 

The one guy is fine, but you can see him crying

 

She has no self respect, or is she just incompetent

Author's Note

Not sure what to tell you :/

Reviews

[Ruth]

This is a journey through lack of esteem, it seems, poignantly versed and I like the form a lot and the pace to this is excellent! xx

[Frank F. Atanacio]

a very good expressional piece Frank

[Mahesh Chand Sharma]

I value and regard your feelings and expression. Remember one thing if u can't change others, change yourself or change the way.Great write. Keep it up.

[Rev. Fr, S. D. Blankens..]

:) *hugs you* Thanks, Sis.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved this. It was great. Well...she doesn't have self respect and she is incompetent. I feel bad for the guy....well thanks for sharing.