foreseen futures

foreseen futures

A Poem by Nobody.

 

ancient secrets flit and play

fireflies in boundless night

sexy specks of truth untouched

by clumsy modern hopes

 

                      

the joy is a foreign virus

infection slithers closer

 

                          suddenly,

             I understand the equation

 

these poor little b******s                         

do not yet

understand that they’re doomed

to further exploration

 

a molested secret is a broken

everything

 

jagged shards of once- perfection

floating in a sea of whatever

© 2011 Nobody.


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I'm going to kidnap your muse... just saying... might wanna invest in those alarm thingys..... this to me rings out about human nature - equations and wondering - push push push - calculator - solve it and then what? just more to consider - the mysteries that so amazed now just little splints floating in the sea of mehhh - clumsy us indeed - ruin the wonders with tainted eager hands ha! nice!

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this has a deep meaning very nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


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the deeper I look into this piece the more uglier it becomes ... great writing as always

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yes, foreseen futures, is it that miserable I wonder or will
we finally get it? Some great lines in this: ancient secrets flit and play
fireflies in boundless night
sexy specks of truth untouched
by clumsy modern hopes
a molested secret is a broken
everything
Nothing is perfect in a perfect world....


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I'm going to kidnap your muse... just saying... might wanna invest in those alarm thingys..... this to me rings out about human nature - equations and wondering - push push push - calculator - solve it and then what? just more to consider - the mysteries that so amazed now just little splints floating in the sea of mehhh - clumsy us indeed - ruin the wonders with tainted eager hands ha! nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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