Today and the morrow

Today and the morrow

A Poem by Sethnicity
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a meditation on a days labor

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So here lie today
the way my traveling shoes sit with disarray
This paper trail
these four walls full
the electric blown gale
like chalk outlines of a house awefull
I could lay like this for ever doubtful
wireless umbilical scheduled sabbaticals
twice a week for the morrow and
Today today today today today

So here lie Today
too much to do too much today
This same ol feeling a Jamboray
This molded wood
these steel strings wound
the vintage stain
When it Bangs the sound is ViBRAtiOn
Beating down SouL REjuvenatiON
When the Silence everywhere does resound
A whole rest for the morrow but for today...

Dynamics Dyenamicks dieNamhicks DaHammocks







© 2010 Sethnicity


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Ooh this is brilliant, love your wordplay in this nice ramble of the mind...
My favorite line, which says for me a lot: " wireless umbilical scheduled sabbaticals"
means you're separating... This gives actually display the perfection in the very clearly contrast.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Thank you for hearing me out! the second verse Makes me think of a one man band with a moonshine jug to blow in his hand.... with cymbals and drums Like Bob Dylan w/ Tom Petty on his back! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ooh this is brilliant, love your wordplay in this nice ramble of the mind...
My favorite line, which says for me a lot: " wireless umbilical scheduled sabbaticals"
means you're separating... This gives actually display the perfection in the very clearly contrast.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this!
When it Bangs the sound is ViBRAtiOn
Beating down SouL REjuvenatiON
I could hear the words play in my head! Brilliant poetry my friend!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds like music.I can hear the song behind this

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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it's been a long day..and your sweet musings and delightful tongue in cheek word play, lift even the most weary of us..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this is one of the best poems I have read today! Sublime use of wording and flow and it holds a beat of its own, not always easy to make the poem beat, as such..but this does! Amazing! xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cleaver play on words

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a winded rhythm that breathes through your words.. playing over the tones of the day, and playing out the music for the morrow... Stunning thoughts.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I hear you man ~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Sethnicity

Just In, TX



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