Love Drain

I Love You like Rain to Surface
I fall with purpose to soak in Your surplus
I high rise against Your Mountains and wet Your grassy Valleys
You're the center of My Force from which My revolution shall rally
I dilate in Your Atmosphere and precipitate in Your Fertile Crescent
I'm riding the current of Your emotion to cool off your Cape and Horn
I in You and above it when Your sad souls cry I pour through them to puppet
their motions as omens they are holograms of Our notions 
they move and meddle moving Our bits around where they settle
when We change our minds these feeble ideas return to Our middle
Not quite a marriage some say mysterious
the seven sides of You and Me
but in my belly I carry Sperm Whales and Hermits and Sea
the swollen members of loves winter and a bed to lay Our head
as You satallete through solar wind to excite Me
and We rise in Misty Gravity
My thoughts gather to Cloud cover Your spots
My thought like Love drain over Thee.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you used the language. Allowing the reader to fall into powerful statements.
"I'm riding the current of Your emotion to cool off your Cape and Horn"
Strong emotion led me on a very good ride in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[J]

wow. you seem a master of double entendre; a wizard of form of metaphor i've not experienced before [and that's saying a.lot.] curious capitals throughout accentuating tone of distinctly alone vs joined, or alone incorporated w.i.t.h. integration. together and all at once, a celebration of joining in a promise. deeply satisfying.

[ghost writer]

love drain..what a delightful oxymoron..drain me some more..

Sigh...... this is just so beautiful, as I have an idea, for who.... wonderful! truly exhilarating, within the heartbeat. Lovely work my friend... nothing need to be said more.

E.L.

[Sethnicity]

Mission accomplished Harlot....

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Never thought metaphors would make me quite so horny..loved it

[An owl on the moon]

What a brilliant journey over earth and soul... you paint the world in intricate emotion, glimpsed through the vastness of space... Love and life moving at the speed of light..

[emmajoy]

There's such a rumble of words and thoughts, like an anthem screaming into space .. you use words like bullets and kisses .. an extraordinary force, strangely about love and passion .. or maybe that's what it's all about!

[A L Shipp]

"I fall with purpose to soak in Your surplus"
WHAT?!
That whole poem is ill but that line is sick.

[Sethnicity]

Thank you for the thoughts... I should have rated this mature but Love is universal so jump in and let go... I will edit this a bit I can all ways do better...