YOUR EMBRACE

YOUR EMBRACE

A Poem by Shabeeh Haider

As the clouds drift up above,
The sky embraces them with love.


The rain drops falling on the sand,
Gently touch the thirsty land.


 The shore embraces them with glee.
The waves that rise up from the sea.


The mighty sun spreads out its rays,
And takes the Earth in its embrace.


My empty soul lets out a sigh,
O hug me, hold me till I die.

© 2016 Shabeeh Haider



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Wow! This is beautiful! Seeing that warm embrace in the existence and its beautiful manifestations and bringing out beautifully is the work of real poets. The poet in you is shining brightly in this soothing craft, Haiderji. Reading this one is an absolute pleasure.
Thank you for sharing..


Posted 7 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

7 Months Ago

Bala, your words are always very inspiring and heart warming. Thank you for such generous comments.
Bala Gorthi

7 Months Ago

Reading your work is my pleasure Sir.
I absolutely love the feeling of an embrace...to have the arms of someone I love wrap around me in a hug. I'm never the one to be the first one to let go!

Wonderfully written, Shabeeh!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

8 Months Ago

We all feel this way Kelly, thank you for your kind words.
A heart soothing piece...And really really beautiful.I could feel this write, Sir.
Magic of nature is like that and it possess a mystical essence in it. We are ought to fall for it. The sun, the sky, the sea, the rain and the soul..what not
I loved this.
Great one.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

8 Months Ago

Gorthi, nature has always been mystical and inspiring for man.
Thank you for taking the time.. read more
Gorthi Manasvini

8 Months Ago

Your welcome, Sir :)
Aloha,

Thank you for your recent comments on my work.

These couplets are quite nice and full of emotional content.

I will return,

Alisa ;-)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

8 Months Ago

Thank you Alisa :)
So very beautiful. Always a treat to read you.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

10 Months Ago

James, thank you. Always wonderful to read your review.
I think the soul behind the pen of this is far from empty. The gentleness and love of Nature affords the reader a feeling of 'floating' almost.
Yes, this I like Shabeeh
Well penned


Posted 10 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

10 Months Ago

Tony, thank you for such wonderful and inspiring words.
Tony Jordan

10 Months Ago

Welcome Shabeeh - very welcome
Lovely couplet...first and second particularly stand out to me

Posted 10 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

10 Months Ago

Jamey, thank you for your kind words.
Every line was so poetic and was reread with caesura. Lovely imagery, and the ending description was most appropriate. :) Tyfs

Posted 10 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

10 Months Ago

Cyprian. Thank you for your kind words
Cyprian Van Dyke

10 Months Ago

You're most welcome :)
I can imagine you wearing nothing as you open your arms far and wide, facing the sky, embracing the beautiful atmosphere of nature.


Posted 10 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

10 Months Ago

Yan, our imagination knows no bounds. Thank you for your review
YanZeros

10 Months Ago

I enjoyed reading it. Thank you too! :D
simple...
sweet...
honest...
and too lovely with the ideas of different elements put here along with the title...
very nice piece ...
Anindita

Posted 11 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

10 Months Ago

Anindita, thank you for such kind words

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Writing poetry is my passion. I have been writing since I was 10 years of age. I love the poets of the Romantic Era and am very particular about rhyme, meter and balance. I have also written many Gha.. more..

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