Illusive Moment

The ocean of fantasy tempts  me,

With its crawling dreams alluring me,

Through my eyes, in my brain,

Creates a solitary oasis in my soul

That still waits for you

Amidst the devastated fence of cognition.

The intense dark night

Studded with stars,

Set up the perfect ambience for you and me,

By the silent sea of romance;

I blush alone with my glittered eyes,

I smile mild and look down,

When the breeze starts playing the violin,

Embracing the grass blades and sand beneath,

I looked at your eyes,

In the blue of my illusive moments,

Inside the reflection of your soul.

The ripples unfurls infidelity of my truth,

The rampage of my faith,

Flush through my rampant tears.

I still wait for you,

Along with slow breeze and cool waves,

That you will come and hold me closer

To promise me we will be together forever!

 

~ “Tears are salty, not more than d sacred waters of the seas blue,

I love you always, not more than every moment, that I miss you.”

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"When the breeze starts playing the violin,
Embracing the grass blades and sand beneath,"
I like the places and the powerful emotion in this poem. You took me to the sea and I could feel the desire of love in your words. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Dayran]

Slowly glides the flow of the flesh's desires, wrapping itself around its object of love, yearning for more and yet not letting go the familiar for something new. Nice write!

[MOON]

Nice write love the line When the breeze starts playing the violin, it sings.

[Heromen Selena]

The imagery you created in the middle of the paragraph was beautiful. Nice job. :)