Help. Me.

Something I wrote during school... I was bored, lol

Running.

Running for life.

Was he near?
I couldn't look back...
Did he stop chasing me?
What happened??

My breath came out in,
Fast,
Short gasps.

I tripped,
I fell,
I looked behind me.

The last thing you heard,
Was a bloodcurdling scream

 

Author's Note

Was bored, but is it still good? It was actually a dream, that I had all but forgot about, lol... I still don't know what it was about actually... I was hoping maybe I could remember more, if I wrote about it. Sadly I didn't get far, as you can tell :P

Reviews

[East of Eden]

i love it! it's pace and rhythm was an immediate hook. i would love you to flesh this out i want to read more of this cat and mouse situation!