A Dagger of Heartbrokenness

A Dagger of Heartbrokenness

A Poem by ShadowHaze

 

I loved him.
He loved my best friend.
I didn't know
 
He set me up.
He got close to me.
To get close to her.
 
My best friend loved him.
I didn't know.
I was blinded by my own stupidity.
 
Now he's gone.
Now I have no friend.
Why didn't I see it
Before?
 
All I know,
As I stare blankly at this page,
Is that,
I had a dagger of heartbrokenness,
Waiting for me.

© 2009 ShadowHaze


Author's Note

ShadowHaze
Is there anything I can change? To me it doesn't seem to flow very well, but I would like your guys's opinoins please.

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eww iv been in this same situationa it sux!!
great poem

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on February 11, 2009
Last Updated on August 7, 2009

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ShadowHaze
ShadowHaze

Lexington, NC



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