Forgotten

Based on true events in my life ;-;

Thinking of you,
wherever you are.
My uncertain soul,
calls out your name.
I long for your touch,
your warm embrace.
I can't help but think,
you are with someone else.

I want to hear your voice again,
yet every time I wonder if you are the same.
We haven't spoken,
in weeks or months.
The unspoken words you have not said.
I wonder if we are still together,
if not,
why didn't you say?

The pain I feel is not the pain of losing you,
but the pain that you have forgotten me.
I sat and waited for you,
and sometimes I would cry myself to sleep.
You may not realize how much I loved you,
and you were everything to me.
Even if you don't want me anymore,
I will never forget the time of you,
when you were with me.

Author's Note

Doesn't really rhyme, but sounds good. >>

Reviews

[Sheila Marie Carr]

Awe made me want to tear up...
Very emotional

[Demi]

T.T So sad...And it depicts the friendship i had with someone too!! T_T Overall, it touched me :3

[Livenrite]

I love it! A great poem! Keep it up!! Thanks for sharing:)

[Zombeh]

Love this piece, it was beautiful, but filled with sorrow. ;_; And the first two lines, reminded me of the letter at the end of the Kingdom Hearts 2 game ;]

[Wamakai]

Beautiful...

[Emi]

The first two lines sound familiar for some reason but my brain is weird that way. I think a lot of people can relate to this, sometimes the thought of being forgotten can make you want to weep (and has actually).

[Danny J.H.]

"Never mix love with alcohol, the drink would be too strong"- Danny J.H.