Your to blame

i hear your voice calling my name,

telling me to keep my mind on the game.

But aint it a shame,

that you are to blame.

 

You use to make me feel divine,

you were my sunshine.

 

My heart now dust,

has became the host of pain,

im sad to say im now insane.

 

Get out of my mind,

Im closing the blinds.

this show is over

now its time to say goodbye

Reviews

[ariel-the-little-mermai..]

Very nicely written. I really like that I could feel the emotion in it very well done

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the direct and honest feel in the poem. Sometime all we have is a goodbye and needed separation. No weakness in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Norma M Sutton]

Interesting to say the least. I like it.

[J. F. Charleston]

It's a good one actually. The rhyme scheme is really good and lets the piece flow. Thanks for the RR.

[Wolf]

im a little rusty, let me know what you think.