Dust To Wind

What is all, if there is no importance?
If those who remember,
forget, they are forgotten.
Drowned in seas of everything's noting.

Shadows are the image
of clay casting themselves from dirt.
Light is slowly abandoned;
Several truths are ignored.
We pride ourselves on height
but too many,
This is just the suns power over night.

Thoughts forever thinking,
have ceased before they started.
Blunt is the instruments tip,
we depend on to progress;
With solemn talk of contemplation,
interesting the stories worms will tell.

Reviews

[Leigh]

I like the first stanza especially and 'Light is slowly abandoned', your poem has sped up time making me think of things in a crumbling temporary world. I found this well thought out poem highly thought provoking in regard to the meaning of all things.

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

Thank you, its reassuring to get a review like this!

[Leigh]

Oh good because you are so welcome, it is well deserved.

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

its you who deserves the compliment! your satisfaction means that there is someone who understands, and what way could I be more fulfilled and thankful than knowing that someone has taken honest time to think!

[BlackHeart]

This is amazing honey, I loved the comparisons that you have one here. I was so sucked in well I was reading this poem I totally forgot about everything else around me. You are a very skilled writer, and I believe that if you wanted to you could go far on a writing job. Keep up the good work honey and thank you for sharing this amazing poem.

[paras]

such a great work and you've put various comparisons and such a great lines.! great work keep it up .!! hope to read more from you .!! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is awesome Shane .Your words beautiful and well penned :)

[Raymond Federle]

This makes me think of 'those that forget are doomed to repeat' Very nice Shane.

[Desiree]

This is terrific! It's amazing and vivid, it's like taking a walk in the mind. Greatly written!

[Julie Spade]

The comparisons are just genius and filled with profounding imagery. I admire your eccentricity through your writing, it shows you can take any concept and creative a masterpiece! Every time i read your requests i am overjoyed because your writing always has something of an essential meaning to me and others :) Thank You

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

I am just a humble leaf, falling from the tree of life!

[Alicia Huntley]

The first stanza is so thought provoking. There is many great lines in here. Good job.

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

Thank you!

[paddy d daly]

''shadows are the image of clay casting themselves from dirt'' great lines, deep and thought provoking, well done.

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

Thank you pat!

[Lyn Anderson]

The last line does it for me. What a great write.

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

Thank you! I'm happy about that last line now!!