Sinful Curves, sonnet II

A sinful woman woos a humble man.

Sinful Curves

 

Sway and twirl thy shape and show me thy curves.

Tilt thy neck, and unfold thy whimsical golden locks.

The sensations thou leave, erect mine wicked dull nerves.

Spin and twirl in a seductive manner; a sight unorthodox.

Reveal to me thine firm and luscious breasts.

Uncover thy splendidly carved legs.

Show thine slim and wholesome waist which tests

Mine craving ego; it humbly begs.

For thee, I befall unto mine pleading knees.

My hugging groin chases thy round and voluptuous behind.

A golden fox you are; a sinful disease.

The sight of you undoes sane men’s wicked pasts; baffles their mimicking mind.

Thou hast left me breathless on the shores of dismay.

For thy sight, I am forever fulfilled, forever gay.

Author's Note

An Elizabethan sonnet in the rhyme scheme of Shakespeare's number eighteen sonnet.

Reviews

[Aethereal]

Your poem was a joy to read. It inspired me to use some of your words to write another version of this poem. Here each line in /0/0/0/0/0 ten syllable meter where / is an accent and 0 is a non-accent. You may keep this poem as a gift to do with as you please:


Shakespearian Vixen

Show me the gist of your serpentine curves.
Tempt me with fine lines of gilded soft locks.
Send me sensations that kindle dull nerves.
Sing me lewd songs fueled by wine on the rocks.
Lure with gyrations that build with great zest,
or guide me through paths traversing your limbs
crossing round hips to the peaks of each breast.
Kill inhibitions till every wit dims
where I'm begging on weak quivering knees.
Break Pandora's locks, and open her box.
Let grave spirits tease as much as they please
as they bring a pox that humbles this fox
by way of this vixen's merciless sway.
Though these joys decay, new troubles shall stay.

[Shane Mohamed]

This is just as good as mine if not better Aethereal. I can't take it. It's yours. There are some contests going on now. I think you should submit this. Thanks for the review. You're awesome.

[Aethereal]

Since you insist, then I'll keep it as my own, but I'll also leave it here to show others who inspired it. Thnks for the inspiration, Shane!

[Shane Mohamed]

It ain't goin nowheres. You're welcome.

[Marie]

Your's is also beautiful Aethereal...

[~]

Provocative and steamy write :) imagery is rich and words flow from one line to the next. :)

[Shane Mohamed]

It is a steamy write. I went through a phase where I was obsessed with blondes! And my girlfriend, Areej, hated me for it! Thanks for the review.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I had a smile from ear to ear, prior my invitation! ; )

If thou left you breathless, I would hope you to be on the shore of something other than "dismay". You wrote this with a clever eye and an eager hand, both attributes I give much applause to!

My best,
Kelly

[Shane Mohamed]

Thank you my Vixen.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...my pleasure!

[Shane Mohamed]

The reader's satisfaction is my satisfaction.

[LouisianaBird]

This is so strinkingly beautiful and a shock. Well done sir!

[Shane Mohamed]

Thank you Bird.

[Sami Khalil]

A most wonderful sonnet. I love your style...:)

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

firstly, i was attracted to the title, "sinful curves. curves are meant to look attractive to the male and female. it is apart of biology. nice choice for the title, Shane. it caught my eye.

Under the Magnifying Glass of Sinful Curves

"thy" tends to work on females like a charm because it reminds them of romance.

"sway" tends to work on males since women tend to carry themselves well.

"whimsical" gave me the impression of something sweet and impish.

"erect" gave me the impression of a penis; ripe and ready to go.

"carved legs" sounds like something carved from DA Vinchi.

"crafted buttocks" made me giggle.

"seduce mine eyes" are sometimes misinterpreted but seductive; yes.

"for thy sight, I am ever fulfilled, I am ever gay."

I am bisexual :)

Gay=happiness
Bisexual= male and female.

Well done, Shane! It was beautiful! You have captured the woman body beautifully! It gave me emotion today.

love,
ria

[Shane Mohamed]

Oh boy! You're one sexual roller coaster! Simmer down tigress.

[Vria P Crow]

HAHA, I am more of a Lion, but I am dating a Tiger and a Wolf...weird mix :P You have calmed me down though because I was born a Mare.

[Shane Mohamed]

I'm glad you're content.

[Vria P Crow]

As am I, friend! Have a wonderful night! :)