Rosy Cheeks

Rosy Cheeks

A Poem by Shane Mohamed
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Of her rosy cheeks.

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Rosy Cheeks


I bloom to the sight of thy face,

To the knowledge of our merriment,

To the sight of thy rosy cheeks that bloom

In the midst of the winter’s gloom.

Your sighs melt my cold heart,

For I praise the interludes of our enchantment;

And for you I would cheat death over and over again.

Wherein your optimism lies, it is oft contagious,

For thine arrow has stuck me straight through

My impatient bosom; but I find you saving me,

Over and over again. Rescue me one last time.

The sight of you blossoms winter’s stubborn cherries.

Time and time again, I quiver from the chills of your

Merry temperament, but I would not have it any other way.


© 2015 Shane Mohamed



Author's Note

Shane Mohamed
A free-verse sonnet, if such a thing exists.

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Wow.. looks like you were about to open your heart before someone special.. great work :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shane Mohamed

2 Years Ago

I call her daily, and she always picks up.
nazia

2 Years Ago

oooooooo.......... lucky you ;)
I picture you waling around the house, holding a flower, and practicing this before you rush to your love's window to woo her. Eloquently written; a bard for the ages!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shane Mohamed

2 Years Ago

She has the cutest dimples in the world. I go nuts when I look at them. Her picture is in my photos... read more
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2 Years Ago

You are kindly welcome sir and thank you!
Shakespeare would probably say..."how did you do that?"

i guess a such thing exists now, even if it didn't before...
you maintain rhythm even without the rhyme..and the theme of strong love shines through.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shane Mohamed

2 Years Ago

Believe it or not, I was reading Shakespeare before I wrote this. It doesn't rhyme but it's still st.. read more
" Rescue me one last time.
The sight of you blossoms winter’s stubborn cherries.
Time and time again, I quiver from the chills of your
Merry temperament, "

You classy writes are just a mirror of the classics. Each line is carefully crafted like an artist...:)...........

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shane Mohamed

2 Years Ago

Thank you Sami. I really admire you. Your talent is beyond comprehension, but you still reach out to.. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. That is a worthy honor from my friends and readers. You are welcome. God bless...:).............. read more
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I liked the mix of blushing with blooming - it creates a lovely image. The warmth that is found in her melt, cheat death and welcome the extravagant feelings. a lovely poem!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shane Mohamed

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the insightful review Skittles. You read my mind :)
This is so great! Fantastic writing, great flow, great message and beautiful.
Awesome piece of work! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shane Mohamed

2 Years Ago

Thank you James. Pleasure having you.

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Added on February 21, 2015
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Shane Mohamed
Shane Mohamed

Dalton, GA



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Name's Sherif Mohamed, but I tell people to call me Shane, since my name has been mispronounced as "Sheriff" many times. I'm 29. Originally, I'm an artist; I draw and paint, as you can see in my pictu.. more..

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