Love's Riddles

Love’s Riddles

Will I ever miss you when you’re gone

Will I ever miss the youth’s fawn

 

You just sit there and ponder you and I’s distance

You just sit there and eye me with such indifference

 

If I ever wanted you I would’ve drawn closer

I’ll just sit there and unwind the riddles of a true poser

 

Will you just stand there with an arched gait

And await the remedies of such wailing fate

 

You’ve been dearly adorned and loved

But as I welcomed with embrace you arrogantly shoved

 

Now I ponder upon the concept of time

Will it distance and sing a mournful rhyme

 

Some things were just never meant to be

Some lovers intertwine and some were simply meant to flee

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Now I ponder upon the concept of time
Will it distance and sing a mournful rhyme

Some things were just never meant to be"

You have summed it up marvelously in the last line and where it applies to all lovers. I hope you don't wail your fate but continue in the search. Excellent...Glad to see you write again...:)....

[Shane Mohamed]

Thank you brother. I needed the push.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)....

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You have penned it well here my friend: sometimes the road we are on is, indeed, uphill. However, rocky roads can be smoothed out with the balance of right tools. The problem though, is in which to apply and when. Good luck with it all Shane!

[Shane Mohamed]

Yeah, I wrote it quickly. I haven't been feeling well lately, so it's transparent through my writing. Thanks for the support Ledrew. I appreciate it :)

[Will Neill]

Am I reading between the lines of a love gone sour....It is always a pleasure to read your poems and stories Shane.

[Shane Mohamed]

Thank you for the compliment and review dear friend. It hasn't gone sour, but it's kind of bumpy...