The Silent Song

The Silent Song

A Poem by Shasha
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Listen to the song of the silence, the unheard voice.

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Let's pause the song we were listening to
And put on the song which was once unheard
The song on which our soul danced
Away from the grieves of the cold
In the warmth of the room inside the room
Stepping on the floors of the heart.
A song with which our words sang
A song which proposed the unspoken
Let's try to listen to the whispers of the silence
The song played in the deepest place of the heart
The song sang by the sweetest voice
Sweeter then the nectar of flowers
The voice can't be heard by anyone
The song of the silence inside.


© 2017 Shasha



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Wonderful use of words and thoughts. I agree. Sometimes silence is wonderful. In a world of noise and rare peace. A private beach or a deep forest. Perfect place to gather our minds. Thank you Shasha for sharing your amazing poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


Shasha

3 Months Ago

Yes actually,
Thank you Coyote for your wonderful review!!!
It's a wonderful concept you've got yourself here. And you've made the first lines very intriguing and that gives such perfection to the poem. Love it!!

Love,
Vasilees.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shasha

5 Months Ago

Thanks Vasilees! You are a true inspiration!
Wonderful write :) The words have been placed very well :)

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Posted 6 Months Ago


Shasha

6 Months Ago

Thank you very much Anand!
Very nice and thanks for sharing your wonderful talent.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Shasha

7 Months Ago

Thank you very much, Roxane!
This is top-notch writing becuz of the way you think about your topic . . . your viewpoint is relatable & your way of writing is to SHOW instead of tell. We all understand the "silent unspoken" parts of life, different for each of us, but it all feels the same, so it connects us. Love your style (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


Shasha

7 Months Ago

Thank you Margie! I love to read your reviews. I think that understanding in the greatest gift one .. read more
I, Silente, approve greatly, hah... But in all seriousness... An almost melodic feel, and wistful wandering of phrase... Spot-on rhymes, and a twisting journey that left me wanting more, but sweeter than nectar of flowers sting... I guess I leave without a voice... Beautifully penned...

Posted 7 Months Ago


Shasha

7 Months Ago

Maybe! Haha!
I think if we continue then this thing will never end.
Silente

7 Months Ago

But who wants it to end...!
Shasha

7 Months Ago

Oh! Alright then,
I smiled harder! Haha!
Great piece, I quite like your choice of words. Also like the freedom each reader has to work the poem out into something that works with their lives. Great job :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Shasha

7 Months Ago

Thank you Willa! Really pleased to hear that from you!
Wow! Your new technique of using vague sort of imagery is just great!
I'm hoping to see this usage in your future poems too!
Keep writing!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Shasha

7 Months Ago

You are a true friend Soumya! I will try to.
Thank you very much!!!
Soumya Deouskar

7 Months Ago

Great! All the best for your future writings!

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Added on October 13, 2017
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Where there are many voices but one sound, the country of love, India



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