Your Voice is Intoxicating

2/8/2011 12:18 pm

Your eyes pull me close
Your lips draw me near
Your voice is intoxicating

Beckon me...

Reviews

[Natasha]

you have a good concept to the poem, i feel as if it is a wee bit too short, if you are going to make a short poem you have to use more powerful words, the poem seemed a bit generic i suppose--adding more descriptive verbs would help