Painfully Fresh

Why does the pain keep setting in

Over and over

In my battered, shattered,

wicked heart??

Reviews

[Jodie Ng]

It's interesting because I expected a longer poem and I am caught off guard by how short and in those 4 lines, you've captured something so angry but something also very painful and it's one of the most powerful things I've ever read. Amazing! You are a talented writer for being able to capture something so strong with so few words! I'm incredibly jealous!

[MissEpic2902]

Short and not so sweet! I love it!!

[Jason Dyer]

Sounds like you are being blamed for the pain you fee.

[Deandra Dawn]

Simple and sweet, longing for more....