Wish

Just few words

If I can get a chance to relive

Then I would like to be the oxygen

That she inhales in order to live.


If my lord grants me my one last wish

Then I would like to be that mirror

In which she sees herself everyday


If I have a chance to go back to the time

Then I would like to pause the moment

When she said, She loves me too


If I can really get a chance to relive

Then please let me be the oxygen

That she inhales in order to live

Author's Note

Raw feelings after listening to an emotional song came out..I just penned them here. This is nothing sort of a poem just few words.

Reviews

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

Next stop, just past obsession, to be one with another, the feel of extraordinary. The wanting, to merge to become one, no more beginnings no more ends. Desire demands and will not bend. It is not enough that I have you, I must possess the essences that is you.
Michael, your words speak two things, the first I have stated but the second is more subtle and just underneath the surface of a mirror.
If my lord grants me one last wish.
Then I would be that mirror
In which she sees herself in everyday.
Regret or just plain remorse is here and you wish to face it.
The smallest parts of life we don't even count enough, can make the biggest impact. The wish for a life you now surround with hope ... is the very thing you would die for to feel again. You have taken the very Strong emotions' of a commitment to another and broken it down to basic Chemistry. A matter of diffusion. So simple but felt through out our body in EVERY atom we breath. Well done my friend I wait for more. God Bless

Sheer Terror

[Michael S]

Thank you so so much for this beautiful and in-depth review, Sheer Kind. I am really happy that you could feel and get so much from these words. An amazing review I say. I am really thankful to you for your very kind words. I always appreciate your review. 😊

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror]

Your welcome Michael

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is really beautiful and romantic. Truly written from your heart. Filled with love and emotions.
I love the way you have wrote this.
You clearly love this girl so much, sure you are both luvky to have eachother. :)

[Michael S]

Haha..I do love her a lot and I guess she feels the same.. I am glad that you could feel those emotions, Cimmy
Thank you so much for this amazing review. 😊

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Anytime :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Then I would like to be the oxygen
That she inhales in order to live."

This has a sweet but dreamy quality to it. I liked how you portrayed the emotions here. Well penned 👍

[Michael S]

Thank you so much :-) I am humbled by your kind words. Glad that you liked this one.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! It was a pleasure 😊

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Lovely poem. Full of emotion. And well said, written. Tyfs!

[Michael S]

Thank you so much :-) I am glad that you could feel this poem.

[Liz]

Such a nice poem portraying your love for another. It's sometimes crazy the extent we would go for those we love, isn't it?

[Michael S]

Thank you so much, Liz :-)

[Bala Gorthi]

Love emotions are very well brought out in this right. The feel came out well in your beautiful craft, Michael. Thank you for sharing.

[Michael S]

Thank you so much, Bala :-)

[Surya]

You played well with words here, describing such beautiful emotions...
Thank you Michael for sharing.

[Michael S]

Thank you, Surya