Can't fight these tears

Can't fight these tears

A Poem by Kat

 Sense that night
 I've been putting up a fight
 From all these tears
 But its just as i feared
 My heart is broken
 Because you have spoken 
"Its time to move on"
 But if I do I won't live on
 My soul is dying
 But you are still trying
 To still be friends
 So i guess its not the end?
 But I've been to damaged
 That I still cant manage 
 To fight these tears
 Even though your near

© 2011 Kat


Author's Note

Kat
GAHHHH!!!! I can't write anything except for about him >:( sorry guys if your getting sick of these heh its like therapy to me

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Its ok :) Writings my therapy to. I like how I can picture your emotions in this. Keep writing!!! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


That tends to happen when people are upset about something. It's the only thing they can write about. =/ I've been like that for quite a while now. I hate it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It sounds like a bad breakup. is what i think correct? I haven't said a word to one of my ex's, but she hasn't dodged the chance to cuss me out every time we pass.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awe. You really do seem to have him on your mind a lot, whoever him is.

Posted 12 Years Ago


been to damaged should be been too damaged. Sorry, one of my biggest peves. Anyway, this poem is really good. I know how it feels to go through this so I guess it really hits home when I read. So I understand that you just need to get it all out in words. Wonderful job

Posted 12 Years Ago


It is wonderful. As you probably know by now, I love poetry ^^'. Poetry is my therapy for other people and it helps to get my feelings out easier. So go ahead and keep the therapy coming! Please, don't be afraid to send me a request to read it! ~ ShadowSpirit

Posted 12 Years Ago


an emotional pour out, it flows clear tears that can be seen through to the inside

Posted 12 Years Ago


It needs proofread, but it was a nice write. understandable that this is what is on your mind

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Kat
Kat

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