What did I do?

What did I do?

A Poem by Logan Freebourn
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Prompt: Current Relationship Word Count: 344 I wrote this when I was having a depressing day after my boyfriend and I broke up.

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With you
I have spent my time
I was yours
And you were mine

But something has changed
Something's not right
And somehow you don't see
You don't see my plight

For days I haven't seen
Any recognition on your face
Like I wasn't there
Just a spot of empty space

What did I do wrong
To make this go array
What do you want from me
Do you want me to go away

I will leave if you like
If that is what you want
Just give me the word
No need to stay and haunt

My subconscious is rattled
Going in circles trying to find
Just what I did
That put me in this bind

Yet you don't even realize
That something is truly wrong
And now I have to question
Did we actually belong

They say opposites attract
But I find that hard to believe
How can ones so different
Possibly interweave

I like to read
And dance the night away
Watch movies galore
And cuddle all day

Is there anything that I like
That you do too
That has nothing to do with partying
Or just wanting to screw

I'm tired of being used
You have never showed you care
I can't put up with this any longer
It just isn't fair

So this is good bye
My last farewell
I refuse to be any longer
Just another empty shell

I'm going to find someone
Who loves me for who I am
That doesn't want me to change
Who isn't just a scam

It might take me forever
I'll probably screw up again
But one day I'll find them
And they'll be a perfect ten

Someone who fits me perfectly
Who loves all of my faults
Someone to cuddle during the day
And at night can do the waltz

Who will talk with me
If a problem were to arise
Who won't avoid me
Refuse to look in my eyes

Maybe one day
This person will appear
For now I'll just wait
As that destined day draws near

© 2014 Logan Freebourn


Author's Note

Logan Freebourn
Just tell me what you think of the poem. I'm really proud of this one cause it is personal and comes from the heart.

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Added on September 17, 2014
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Logan Freebourn
Logan Freebourn

Raleigh, NC



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I am currently an engineering student at NC State. Sometime I just get in the mood to write poetry. Either to express my feelings or just because I'm feeling particularly creative. I just want people .. more..