A Place Called Mysteries

A Place Called Mysteries

A Poem by SheActsLikeSummer
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I live in a place called Mysteries, a place that no one knows...

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I live in a place called Mysteries,
A place that no one knows,
A place where flowers bloom in the winter,
And birds fly south in the spring
I live in a place called Mysteries,
A place I can call my own,
A place where the sky is green,
And the lakes, a crimson hue
I live in a place called Mysteries,
A place filled with imagination,
A place where gravity does not exist,
And when you sing, the sound travels faster than light
I live in a place called Mysteries,
A place that there's only one,
A place where you smile for no reason,
And can laugh all day without a care
I live in a place called Mysteries,
A place that is nonsense,
A place where fish can breathe,
And humans hold their gills
I live in a place called Mysteries,
And boy am I happy here

© 2012 SheActsLikeSummer


Author's Note

SheActsLikeSummer
I decided to change my genre for just a second and create a non creepy poem. Here you go. Oh, and please don't forget to tell me what you think about it, I love to hear your views!

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Wow! This is great, I was felt so content reading it... :') thankyou for uploading.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This poem sort of reminds me of your "safe place," or "happy place." I have one that is similar...I go there in my mind when I am in pain and really hurting, or emotionally upset. Very good!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I gotta say this, I wrote a poem once called "A place called memories!" Can't believe the similarities with the title.. then the content too :D woah!!!

Again you have done a great job. Any explanation over the human "gills"? sounded kinda off there? Otherwise, another great read

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hah its great! I really want to go there:/

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is funny i love it we're all happierin a world that makes less sense than this one

Posted 12 Years Ago


Pretty words, rhyming smoothly, it makes this mysterious place seem almost real!
Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I wanna go see :-)Beautifully painted picture your words paint.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very imaginative and creative, I like it :-) You should experiment with different genres more often =^ v ^=

Posted 12 Years Ago


SO NICELY DESCRIBED...Liked the flow and continuity through out the content.
such deep feelings have been so beautifully illustrated by you.


Posted 12 Years Ago


Your place of mysteries sounds pretty sweet to me. I would be happy there too! Especially the whole "smile for no reason" bit... I like it. It is fun and whimsical and lighthearted. Very fun read!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 10, 2012
Last Updated on April 10, 2012
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SheActsLikeSummer
SheActsLikeSummer

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I wish there was a single moment in my life that summed up who I am. Just a short snippet of time that I could copy and paste here so I didn't have to rack my mind for something to say. But I kind of .. more..

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