ROAR

ROAR

A Poem by TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror







Oh, Mother hear my Roar, a roar of Thunder


To stop the rain’s devour


my flood of tears deprive color


Bouquets fade like the cinders of a fire


Blossoms I grew with my own hands care


Hands that left my beauty so dear


Beauty she resides with the smallest of Stars


A Sliver of diamond shining in the dark


Under a moon of riots and war


Oh, Mother hear my Roar, a roar of thunder





Terry D'Arcy-Ryan




© 2017 TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror



Author's Note

TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror
This Poem was written on Mother's Day. Mother's day reminds me of a time when women were not thought of as equal to Men. A time when abuse of any kind remained secret and women silent. My Mother would ask for my silence in glances and actual words if angry enough. She wasn't ready for me I was born to Roar. The Love that flows through generations of Women is here in my words for my daughter Natalie, mother Marilee, grandmother Gladys and my special great grand ma Cassy God Bless you wherever you are blood of my blood, Mother, hear me Roar. If you are still reading thank you and God Bless

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this is absolutely wonderful keep up the great work

Posted 1 Month Ago


This is beautifully written. Great words. Great work. :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

4 Months Ago

Snow Angel, this Poem is my favorite this one means so much to me. Thank you for taking the time to .. read more
Thank you for submitting for all about love contest!

Posted 5 Months Ago


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"Under a moon of riots and war", extremely vivid. The piece as a whole, bold. Loved it.

Posted 6 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

6 Months Ago

Ty, this Poem is very dear to me I put my heart in these words thank you for such a strong reviewread more
Beautifully written! Love the flow and rhythm of the poem! Thank you for entering the inspiration contest!

Posted 7 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words
I heard that roar.



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Posted 7 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Months Ago

Ellie Qtz, it was an extraordinary roar thank you
Tears of frustration resulting in her roar going unheard or not allowed to be unleased? The tears then killing the flowers she herself grew? I understand squashing a primal howl at the unfairness of it all...am I close? Remember I'm still at neophyte status in reading poetry and this is really deep. And the words flow...not disjointed, they all connect properly for a smooth read.

Posted 7 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Months Ago

Carol, that is a great analysis life is funny we are
given children so unlike ourselves. M.. read more
Carol Cashes

7 Months Ago

Okay...wow. Just...wow. I'll have to digest this "lesson" a bit, but your first words encouraged m.. read more
Its beautifully written, how a womans voice is being deprived from expressing her feel. This is something that is bothering every women even today after all the freedom fights too. The constitution says right to speech but the same constitution fails to make her voice from being heard.

Posted 7 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Months Ago

Manasa, your words of praise are happiness. This poem is about breaking the cycle of abuse from the.. read more
Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Thank you....:)
it's beautiful. descriptions can be more vivid

Posted 7 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Months Ago

Thank for your words of praise this poem is loaded with emotions I tried to reflect.
A sliver of silver diamond in the rough dark... My eyes were deprived of color upon reading this, but with a roar... Well... I seem to have gotten my hues back, just in time for the thunderous end of a sweetly penned poem...

Posted 8 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Months Ago

What a review, you put a smile on my face during a very stressful day I thank you.

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When I was a young girl I was your average Tomboy. I lived to watch Star Trek the only thing that could take me away from the voyages of the Star Ship Enterprise was playing Baseball with the boys. .. more..

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