SUGAR BUZZ

SUGAR BUZZ

A Poem by TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror
"

A stampede of magnets Pulls us into a stranger's kiss

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you wondered in

With a Cheshire grin

Eyes made for sin

I instantly tripped

Bracing myself the soft fall

A streak of color found

The long way around

the unexpected place

caught off guard

Swept me off my feet

Face to face

close and secure

Our eyes devour

The first layer

Caught in a stare

A stranger's arms

Our lips are closer still

A stampede of magnets

the force of a stranger's kiss

Like a punch in the face

A sweet candy taste

The feel of colors

All of them

even sparkles

And odd tinted shades

Smashed or whole

Shapes of hunger

new an old

Lost and found

Touching me insane

the Lack of restraint

Jolly ranchers gone extreme

Falling for the sights

Lips collide

a push pure ravenous

the taste of cherry snow

Frozen delights

Freezing my brain making me dizzy

I smell of Banana split an it melts in my mouth

Sugar coma coming into focus

turning away from the stranger

A salty shiver to softly recover

Still in his sights

hand brushes my cheek

the tingle of zots

On my lips

a war of sweet and sour

promise of kismet wrapped in a kiss

this calls for a coke and a shot of pop rocks

This guy is Cherries Garcia

With an angel's touch

Cotton candy shades of pink and blue

Float by softly in the sky

Beyond a dream

around the corner

to be over the rainbow

lost on the candy aisle

gazing into the the icee machine

sugar buzz black out

left me standing all alone



Terry Darcy-Ryan






This is dedicated to my little sister the Ginger Ninja

Love you Sweet






© 2017 TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror



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Delicious in every way .... a candy fantasy, great theme!


Posted 1 Day Ago


The ginger ninja.
How many times have you battered her.
Now running to the sweetie shop. lol

Posted 4 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

can't stop thinking about candy. the "buzz" created by your words equally as effective as sugar. both sweet and powerful ...

Posted 4 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

4 Months Ago

Pete, as is your review Sweet and Powerful. Thank you
Equating the different flavors and textures of candy with the different flavors and textures of a stranger's attraction? Brilliant.

Best lines:

"A coke and a shot of pop rocks
This guy is Cherries Garcia
With an angel's touch"



Posted 4 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

4 Months Ago

Carol, I see I hit your sweet tooth. You know our generation grew up with the strange stories regar.. read more
Beautiful theme, loved it.......

Posted 4 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

4 Months Ago

SSR, I appreciate your review thank you so much

Sheer Terror
I absolutely love this
Well done

Posted 4 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

4 Months Ago

Juliespenhere, I am always thrilled when another writer enjoys my work. Thank you for taking the ti.. read more
Dude, you've got me craving candy like mad. lol Brilliant poem and outstanding visionary!!! :D

Posted 4 Months Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

4 Months Ago

Hey Raven Moon I was just having a little fun with a
buzz. No worry s I will be back to the.. read more
It is so easy to fall for the first layer... Pure lust with nothing to taint it. Enduring the layers beyond is another matter. You poem made me lament this experience.

Posted 4 Months Ago


I definitely adore the candy theme that's prevalent throughout this poem. You did a good job making me visualize something sweet, and overall, the poem now has me wanting to go get some candy XD. Anyway, great work! :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


I GOT OVER MY SUGAR FIX. DIABETES RUN IN THE DARBY CLAN. DON'T HAVE IT BUT KEEP IN THE KNOW.
LOVE THE POEM.THANKS.

Posted 4 Months Ago



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Added on August 28, 2017
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TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror
TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror

PHOENIX, AZ



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