Stubborn

I wring
My wet hair,
again.

I heard the rain approach,
But I did not care.

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

Ah, the rain....
My favorite place to walk, within it, my hair desires it, my Soul drinks each drop as it seeps into my flesh and bone. What a wonderful piece, one I needed to read, especially on days like these. Thank you

[Eldee]

Beautiful, short and simple. There is little else one can say in response to this.
This is image provoking as well, prompting the questions of who, what, why.
Was this person just playing in the rain? Fresh from the shower and uncaring that they would become mud splattered? Or could it even be an ode to self-confidence and self-awareness.

Fantastic job!

[carina_et_vela]

I love this. Its simplicity makes it so poignant.

Brilliant! I especially admire how, despite its shortness and simplicity, you got your point across. Very witty, and yes, stubborn. Sounds like me.

[Kimberly Smith]

mmmmmmmmmm nice..nice nice