What Are They

What Are They

A Poem by Shelby Baker

Hormones: what are they?

They make you feel as if your going to die

Feel at times lonely as hell.

Happy one minute and the other like your somebody that doesn't belong

Makes you want to punch the wall

They make you desire the one you love

They make you hate people you love

They make you feel as if nobody in the world sees you.

Makes you feel like nobody loves you

Makes you unsure of yourself Makes you feel shy

They make you cry either from happiness or pain

hormones are a part of life..

© 2009 Shelby Baker


Author's Note

Shelby Baker
Just something i wrote. Please honestly tell me what you think. I wrote this when i was ten.

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I liked the simple truth of it and for the most part, that's all that really matters.

We sometimes complicate things as we grow away from childhood forgetting that the eyes of a child oftentimes are clearer for the lack of adult disillusionment.

You were obviously very astute at the age of ten. ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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At the age of 61 I know these hormones well. Well Written

Posted 14 Years Ago


You have got it right at least in content But you couch it in prose not poetry

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is something no one can define. Feelings, emotions, love, hate, anger, depression, aggression, etc.

We just feel these emotions
And they can be called as Hormones,

Very rightly said.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think it was pretty good i understand it alot. Im having alot of hormones right now so i can relate to it and also i agree that is was hormones are. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Shelby Baker
Shelby Baker

Ware, MA



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