Lies

 

will watch those lies slid off your  tongue like turpentine but don't think you're getting away with them

I might just be remembering them and waiting for the day to drop the bomb

 

Author's Note

Just something small

Reviews

[kewlbluetiger]

Nice. Isn't that how relationships work? LoL Good stuff.

[Roy]

Wo wo wo!!! You speak like the Nemesis! Very powerful set of words!! Kudos!

[angelina neves]

oh! :(
I think lies are a way of saying a "different truth"! If some one lies to me it is because they are telling me i'm not trustful, or because I'm too important to them for them to lose me if i misinterpret the truth... something like that!
= the "style" is powerful and beautifully done!

[Bare trees]

A little threatening there isn't it. Nicely done with a tinge of suspence.

[William Brett Starr]

Short and to the point, um, very good. I love the style.

[Eternally Elemental]

D:

Scary, but so true to its nature. The consequences for lying are only fair. This was like a punch in the face. No euphemisms in sight. This is only truth, the opposite of a lie.

Powerful piece, and for something so short. I guess punches can't be prolonged haha, they give an instant hit.

Very powerful.

[Jibey]

Kind of scary :-)

[Abd-afeez]

Wow! Short but powerful you know. I like it.

[John Stussy]

Small, yes. Dangerous as well though. There's a venomous drip to this one of a calculating vengeance. It makes me come close to pitying the liar, except for the fact that they'll just be getting what's coming to them, really. Lies come to light and have a sharp bite.

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

Pass the aggression, please... Mighty forceful & universally understood.
I love the turpentine ref... That's definitely fuel for that bomb that comes later..
Straightforward, in your face poetry!!!!
You're worthy SB..
Kudos.
LeeLee