An angel beneath the midnight sky

I kissed her mouth like a dark red rose

Set upon a marvel dream of white

 

So pure of thought like a vestal dream

Jewelled grace of a goddess

 

Sweatened by her desireful eyes

Waiting under the sky

With her tearaway stars

 

Verona, Mishikan and Aleesa

All goddesses of old

Of beauty and valor

 

All matter not to this

Goddess of the weaning stars

 

Me besó en la boca como una rosa de color rojo oscuro
Situada sobre una maravilla sueño de blanco

Tan puro de pensamiento como un sueño vestal
Enjoyada gracia de una diosa

Sweatened por sus ojos desireful
Esperando en el cielo
Con sus estrellas tearaway

Verona, Mishikan y Aleesa
Todas las diosas de la antigüedad
De la belleza y el valor

Toda la materia que no esta
Diosa de las estrellas del destete

Author's Note

I would just like to say that the version below is in Spanish and is the exact same as the above version. I added a Spanish version because it's my baby girls favourite language ^^

Reviews

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simply stunning work

[Liza]

english does not do the emotions justice - i also tend to favor spanish - thank you for sharing - this was a sensual embrace

[Skoo.]

This is awesome d: I love how you whacked out the Spanish, for some reason it sounds more romantic (: but I think you forgot to translate "sweatened"
I am also proud that I could understand it without having to read the English part again d:
This is brilliant, well done Sherbzisaur (:

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the use of the Spanish language to strengthen the meaning in the poem. Anything with myths and goddesses I like to read. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Calypso]

I love, love how you write the poem in Spanish at the end. I have this love affair with Spanish. Wonderful and descriptive poem too.

[☯]

Beautifully and nicely written. The flow was also very good. Great write! :)

[BlessdWithACurse]

Beautiful :) xxx

[Alex Walters]

I loved the imagery that was used within the poem. The word desireful seemed a little out of place to me, but, other than that, it was a great read.

[Fontane Wong]

A sensational poem. A prose of beauty that works on all readers. A beauty to read!

[Aidz]

Sensational write