The Seven Years of Albus Potter
A Book by ShimmeringGlaze
 This is the story of Albus' seven years at Hogwarts. Characters feature: Rose, Fred, George jr, Scorpio, Skyler, Neville, Prof. MacGonagal, Luna, Lily, Hugh, James and more!  © 2011 ShimmeringGlaze
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Ingore errors this is my first piece of writing. So unless you absoultly hated it dont flame it.
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honestly, you need a lot of work. In a good way.
this could be really great if you get an editor. i would help you, only because i love Harry Potter so much and have written a fanfiction book myself about his kids, and i know that this could be a great piece of work. you are very sketchy.
you jump around, the use of adjectives would be great and some verbs too. you could provide a background as well on the characters, explaining who they are in a way
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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honestly, you need a lot of work. In a good way.
this could be really great if you get an editor. i would help you, only because i love Harry Potter so much and have written a fanfiction book myself about his kids, and i know that this could be a great piece of work. you are very sketchy.
you jump around, the use of adjectives would be great and some verbs too. you could provide a background as well on the characters, explaining who they are in a way
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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ShimmeringGlazeWylie, TX
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I love all Legend of Zelda games.
I'm a new writer.
I love pirates.
I love art.
I have a deviantArt account and it is DarkLinkandLink4321.
I'm in love with reading.
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