ms muse a thief

ms muse a thief

A Poem by Shirlena
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hush in this deep



interrupting while welcomed


burglarizing unconsciousness


subtracting golden antique minuet



where will you advance with pen today… musette


at dusk tread light as this could be the night


wakening from divided slumber…file among notes


do another soliloquy


or take your meanings down upon a pad


becoming affixed at your creativity  I take dictation


open curtains to expose the moon


so inspiration competes no blindness


not scaring off chance of each rumination


but encourage pages to breathe


indulge in comfort so you will stay



so what do you say…inspiration



where will the pen tip with me this dusk


together you and I sedate the truth


tickle anger til it squeals mercy


release wild repressions making us insane


creating worthy of us… what do you suggest


we paint while the world


knowing so small…. hibernates



speak sweet with undertone that no one mumbles with agitation


armed of broomsticks because they are fools


wedged between brick tenement



ready to shake the soul?



as outsiders numb of our code


nobody heard how we conspire



ms muse...stealing nights by wing


mellifluent


thief at my side


 


 


 



 



© 2014 Shirlena



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Shirlena

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Simply Eloquent...every single line was magical. Miss reading your work my friend, hope life is treating you kind and all is good:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Brilliant summation of poetry, poets and their muses. Outstanding last verse.

Posted 2 Years Ago


wow girl, thats some deep poetry right there, very well written indeed. so much depth and meaning, i love how you carefully put each word together and everything just perfectly fell into place. thumbs up to you..captivating.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shirlena

2 Years Ago

Thank you sister friend. You are too kind.
One of your best poems. You are creating the worthy. Excellent...:)...................

Posted 3 Years Ago


The muse is a fickle and mischievous one indeed...I carry around paper and a pen 99 percent of the time, yet she always seems to come around during that one percent when I have one or neither of them...I shudder to think of all the poems I have written, that I didn't write, if that makes sense...as always, it's hard for me to cite specific bits for your poems are such well-oiled machines with every line interlocking like a completed jigsaw puzzle without the outlines of the individual pieces, if THAT makes sense haha...Frieda has summed it up perfectly (as she always does), this is a poet's poem...you speak for all of us with sublime precision...now if anger would only stop tickling me...I wait patiently for an opening when I can turn the tables on it...maybe someday...the usual brilliance my friend, you're hands-down one of my favourite poets here.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I adore every word of this, a perfect poet's poem...


ms muse...stealing nights by wing
mellifluent
thief at my side

That alone is gorgeous in its own write...you slay me dahlin, each and every time!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Brilliant. The muse the thief in the night, steals my sleep -- this is gorgeous, a wonderful write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Wow, this blew me away. It is the first thing I have read of yours and I can tell I will be coming back for more. The way you piece together your words is incredibly artistic, and you clearly speak from your heart and soul. Bravo, this was absolutely gorgeous.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shirlena

3 Years Ago

I appreciate you for coming by to read something I wrote Ashira, thank you very much. I'm excited ab.. read more
This shook my soul to its core. Shirlena, you wield such edgy but real words when you write. It is like this wonderful pen and you melt as one when it meets the paper. May your muse steal our eyes and minds always.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shirlena

3 Years Ago

Thank you will because the biggest pay off is that someone is touched by what you write. It is the r.. read more

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