Mistake

Who said God never makes mistakes?

Who said humans are different from others?

Here He pays for His misjudgements,

and grieves for His loss.

He dwelled in His creation,

With a dissatisfied impression.

What more could You want

with a world You could flaunt,

Believe me You shan't

make a mistake irrecoverable, Oh You can't.

Cried the winds and the mountains,

While the waters hit on the quiet shores.

Oh believe me he said,

I shall give them cleverness 

that others has pled

Perfect admirableness.

He watched them kill His flawless world

but he waited until, He burned it all and had them dead.

Oh, couldn't they see me glower?

Had I not given them the brainpower

and watched the others cower

As they destroyed the world i created...

He said, as the earth burnt with pain,

Another star, without any gain.

                                                                                                     

Author's Note

I hope you guys understand my message, my intention was certainly not to demean any God or deity.
Its just imagination and shows the disappointment of God, as He sees what humans have done to the earth.
Do read and review, Shivai.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe the Gods would be disappointed for the actions of man.
"Oh, couldn't they see me glower?
Had I not given them the brainpower
and watched the others cower
As they destroyed the world i created..."
The Native Americans asked the white man after they cut down the forest of Ohio. "Why do you want to destroy all things that are beautiful." Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Shivai]

Thank you so much for the review!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Divya]

Nice written shivai. Truly we all think God has disappointed us, but actually we have disappointed him

[Shivai]

Agreed! Thank you.

[TPK Stories]

I often wonder what God thinks of what humans are doing to his creation. Well written Shivai.

[Shivai]

Thank you so much!!!

[Samaira]

You have written this really well. God would be really disappointed in us. everything we do today leads to nothing but destruction of what He created. This madness of money and power that we have been sucked into will destroy the very essence of humans.

[Shivai]

Yes! I totally agree Mannat.
Thank you.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Ahh yes free will...
I agree that Humans will devour it all until the very end...
Earth Mother is pleading with us, and all we can do is assign monetary value to finite things.
Quality writing about a painfully true subject.
Thank you

[Shivai]

Thank you!!

[Simon Welsh]

Reminds me of that Nietzsche quote. Good writing.

[Tyrean_m]

Wow, this is amazing. You are an amazing writer, cant wait to see more of your writing! :)

[Shivai]

Thank you, Tyrean!

[Taylor]

This is very good. You have a strong point. I'm very impressed. :)

[Shivai]

Thank you!!

[sinNsincerity]

No offense taken and you should be able to freely express yourself without any explanation Shiva.
I enjoyed the message and the weight it carries!

[Shivai]

Gee, Thank you so much!
Shivai* :)

[wordman]

i understood perfectly,and you are wight. but yet i wonder, if he did not know this two thousand years ago
he gave us freedom of choice

[Shivai]

Well, you didn't understand it that well then.
Here, I am not blaming God for our creation, I am just trying pass a message that first off humans aren't particularly doing good to the environment and earth- that He created.
And I am just placing a possibility that maybe for God creating humans was a mistake.
Haha, two thousand years is nothing for The immortal, mate.
I don't see how placing opinions can make one a wight, I m sorry, but each and everyone has their perceptions and believes, I think we must respect that.
Regards,
Shivai

[wordman]

well i`m sorry but i don`t follow you..god created the world and all that's in it [ my belief ]
read morewell i`m sorry but i don`t follow you..god created the world and all that's in it [ my belief ]
man has screwed up every thing in it no doubt,but god knew this,we must go through this to appreciate and respect the next world which i believe to be heaven

[Shivai]

I respect that and Yes, i agree god has created the world

[wordman]

i feel like as a human that god has overlooked a lot of things,i feel like he has turned his back on us as well.it is a great write and shows the greed of people

[Shivai]

Thank you!

[wordman]

my pleasure