BEFUDDLED

Lost in thoughts

A state of reverie

Some wicked thoughts

creating fear

Sometimes a collision

Two many conceptions

same soul bear...

Perceive herself

Like two many heads

Arisen from same body

Try to overlook

Try to counsel

Again arise

Unable to resist...

This addled state

is making my dear

Fragile

as entrapped 

In snare..

God suggest some ray

Let those eyes

Again sparkle

With happiness

Without any fear...

Author's Note

sometimes these things happen in life....I am very unclear regarding this but I have seen my friend going through this....I wish her to be again the same...

Reviews

[Dayran]

The anxiety of coming into contact with far too much before we learn to deal with it ... can be fearful .. to our normal sense of loving life. Reading a good story book before bed would help with the source of it in the dreams. Nice ...

[anne]

thanks Dayran...:))

[NoelHC]

Ever hopeful, we wish the best for our friends. Well done.
In the lines
Two many conceptions
Like two many heads

If you used "two" intentionally, a clever twist, and interesting, if not, that should be "too"

[anne]

thank you so much Noel...so nice to see you always...yes that was done for purpose..:))

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Lot of your work come from your friends life. You must thank them all :p
Wonderful piece of work as usual.

[anne]

Oh...yeah I should...thank you Nitesh Gi for your time and review..:))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

once enough things happen in our lives, the vision totally changes....the clarity becomes fogged up, and we see with wary eyes what we once enjoyed with innocent wonder.

[anne]

Yeah..it do happen...thank you so much Jacob...:))

[Sanjh]

I think this happens with everyone of us, at some point in our life. But time heels everything, I assume.

NIce poem, keep writing...:)

[anne]

thank you Sanjh...:))

[Matching Socks]

I think we sometimes feel overwhelmed by everything that's going in around us and the responsibilities of life are difficult to manage. Good poem Anne, your caring sensitive nature always shines in your poetry.

[anne]

yeah..exactly....thank you so much dear Ance...:))

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome ((hug))

[Ana B.]

lucky for us all time heals our wounds, and the scars we get are a reminder and a token of our strength.
I love the idea and the word choosing, well done Anne.

[anne]

exactly..thank you so much Ana...:))

[Lenah Mehzabin]

last stanzes are really very beautifully expressed nd yes i totally agree that we go through a lot of worse situations in life but all we have to do is b back in our previous state forgetting all those fears bad mares nd have a new start .. :-) .. very nice !

[anne]

thank for sharing these words, very true...thank you so much...:))

[Lenah Mehzabin]

welcome :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of description leading to the hopeful ending.
"God suggest some ray
Let those eyes
Again sparkle
With happiness
Without any fear..."
Good to have confident and hold hope near always. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[anne]

thank you so much CP...so nice to have you always...:))

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Anne.