SPARKLE! ZING! ZAP! POP AND CRACK!

SPARKLE! ZING! ZAP! POP AND CRACK!

A Poem by THE Super Hero
"

We always turn to stars for hope.

"
SPARKLE! ZING! ZAP! POP AND CRACK!

The stars are warm and bright...

SPARKLE! ZING! ZAP! POP AND CRACK!

We're so close I can almost touch them...

SPARKLE! ZING! ZAP! POP AND CRACK!

Oh! That star flew past so close, it almost kissed my cheek...

SPARKLE! ZING! ZAP! POP AND CRACK!

We reach to touch them...

SPARKLE! ZING! ZAP! POP AND CRACK!

Our hands are covered in dust...

SPARKLE! ZING! ZAP! POP AND CRACK!
Then I watch it happen...

SPARKLE! ZING! ZAP! POP AND CRACK!

The stars are starting to burst...?

SPARKLE! ZING! ZAP! POP AND CRACK!

They are catching on fire...?

SPARKLE! ZING! ZAP! POP AND CRACK!

We're catching on fire...?

SPARKLE! ZING! ZAP! POP AND CRACK!

Now everything is dust...?
....
No.
Now we are the stars.
SPARKLE! ZING! ZAP! POP AND CRACK!

© 2012 THE Super Hero


Author's Note

THE Super Hero
Written on a new program I got called 'Writersroom' and it's just a blank window to get you writing. Here is something I randomly wrote!

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Very well done! The repetition (with fireworks terminology) reminds me of my childhood. :D

I really like the questions towards the end, and answered with a single No.. Shows the flow between your lines. Cleverly executed

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 16, 2012
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THE Super Hero
THE Super Hero

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