He and he

It was a time when he loved she and she blushed,
They used to go to parks and when people saw they hushed.
But as time passed he told she that James loved john.
She was shocked but new that a new era was born.
James met him and cried all day.
John was hit bacause he was a gay.
When he told she, she was enraged.
She went to the public and wrecked havoc.
She pulled James and John, let people say what.
He loved she and was always with his girl.
They fought for James and John for they wanted their love to sail.
When people saw how truly they loved,
Surprisingly they were moved.
And then more people joined ,
Ha and he and she and she were all rejoiced.
And that is how the system continued.
For true love could move mountains.

Author's Note

It is a small attempt of mine to support gayism and lesbianship.
I promote equality .

Reviews

[Eternal Devotion]

I promote equality too! I loved this poem i old feel true emotion behind it, it entertained me and keept me wanting to read on. Only one small criticism which i don't think differs the quality. In the first line "Its was a time when he loved she and she blushed" perhaps "there was a time when he loved her and she blushed" may have made a tiny bit more sense. Other than that perfect read and i'd love to read more poems similar this one. 95/100

[Shreeraksha Naik]

Thank you so much for your beautiful review. I myself didnt realise the mistake in the first line, thank you for making me realise. It made my day by your beautiful review .Thank you once again