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A Poem by ☾Panda☽
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It will be alright, when I'm home with you

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It feels like I'm losing control
Thoughts driving me insane 
Like I'm a broken fragile doll
That walks in the ice cold rain

I give myself a pep talk
By every step I make
It's a long tired walk
The cold keeps me awake

It's late in the night
And exactly at the midnight hour 
I can see some starlight 
That gives me the power

And I know that it will be alright
When I'm home with you
Cause you will hold me tight
Till the sweet morning dew

© 2013 ☾Panda☽



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☾Panda☽
I appreciate every comment! :-)

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there's no place like home
there's no place like home
there's no place like home :)

inspires me to appreciate ... i admire all attempts to rhyme and bring a moment because i lack the discipline to do it ... nice work Panda
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

3 Years Ago

thank you E. :-)
Lovely work my friend! I can't wait to read more of your work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

3 Years Ago

okay thank you friend;)
Isn't it comforting to be back home...where your heart belongs?
A lovely piece. Great!

Posted 3 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

3 Years Ago

Yes it is ;-) thank you
one sky

3 Years Ago

You're welcome.
To be home is to be at peace.
I love the concept of this one. Powerful word choice.
Perfect last verse...it sums it all or can stand alone to tell the gist of the poem. Who won't feel at home with someone dear to you?

Thank you so much for this relevant share. Keep writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughts!
It is a very lovely poem,well penned my friend.

Posted 3 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

3 Years Ago

Thank youuuu
Home is where the heart lives...Bravo.......................

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Good. You are welcome...:).................
☾Panda☽

3 Years Ago

Okay :-) ........
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)>...................................
i like this poem, and the reiteration of the word 'cold.' great job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

3 Years Ago

Thank you :-)
A lovely poem, very personal in the way it covers a person's thoughts as they walk, and the imagery is pretty, a nice read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much:)
Exactly there is nothing like home and no feel like sweet heart.

Posted 3 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

3 Years Ago

thank you :-) I agree with you
Aww that was lovely, and so inspiring! Thank you! Love the optimism in this. Keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

3 Years Ago

thank you for this sweet comment (:

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Added on December 14, 2013
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Tags: Fantasy, Light, Dreams, Home, Trust


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