Dream, Real and We

Sun in the morning

Moon at night...

In the daytime, we stay low

At night, where glows go?!

 

I hear you shout, down the hall

What happened? Oh no, it's a stranger's call.

I don't leave bed, you jump on

And I think-

OMG! What the hell is going on?

 

We cook together, eat sitting besides

Are we taking much time?

Put that kinda thinking aside.

All see us as the perfect quo

Only we know that how mad we can go.

 

That is the dream but, real is also cool.

We stay long hours, in the pool.

We do homework, disturbing each other

We go playground, holding each other.

 

We run fast, jumping over the bushes

We run like if we stop, we'll turn into ashes.

It is fun, nobody wins

What could possibly change, if we were twins?

 

But today, you now exhausted

I'm still running,

I know inside you're burning. And I'm laughing

Oh damn,,,what is this !!?

Why I'm falling, and why the smell stinks.

 

It is an old well, I'm falling inside

Getting many hits, here and there.

It's paining so much, I go numb

Watching this accident, makes you dumb.

 

You now run like hell

To call our parents

My parents trying to get me out

You parents trying to stop you cry.

 

I'm going hospital, being carried on stretcher

You're going too, carried in lap.

After some hours, all gets end

They are packing me, in their bag.

 

Our dream stayed dream

Real stays real.

Just one thing changed

We couldn’t stay 'we' ..

Reality blew us away.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and powerful use of words and thoughts. I did like them.
"Our dream stayed dream
Real stays real.
Just one thing changed
We couldn’t stay 'we' ..
Reality blew us away."
I liked the above lines. Perfect closure to the excellent poetry.

[Shuvadip Mallik]

Thank you very much Coyote for your time and effort. And your constructive review, it means a lot to me. And about those lines.. that is what happens when we grow up, our dreams die. right?

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometimes. If we allow to die. You are welcome.

[Missowl]

I like this, very sad and very pretty. There are some grammatical errors like missing words and some parts that could be reworded, but overall a beautiful and emotion provoking poem :)

[Shuvadip Mallik]

Thank you very much Stella. Your valuable review is more than welcome to me. It's encouraging. And, if you can please let me know of the mistakes.. I'll be grateful. :)

[Missowl]

Of course! As soon as I have a chance, I will let you know where the mistakes are so I can correct them.