Dreamland

Glows all over the road,

Breezes of the wind

Makes me shiver,,,

From the core

I fell in love from the first day

Ohh, my..
Love at first sight.

It gave me the time that I have

It grew me up to be me

Every moment I feel

For an eternity.

Some things never fade away

Some goes out of reach too fast

Some we can never forget

Some we try not to remember.

But I do know

This is what all I know

This has gave me the greatest show

If they ask if I want to leave?

I gotta say noo.

This time,,

This life

Full of love

Full of shine..

All the darkness fade behind.

So when I go to bed,

I open up my mind.

All things are bright and beautiful

So full of life.. So delightful

I so want to live there,, with all the cool.

But, can't stay because time wakes me up

Makes me stand and push forward

I leave asses behind and fly away.

Oh, I leave my dreamland

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

As your poem illustrates, our "dreamland" is, paradoxically, derived from pain, the sharpest contrast from the life we seek. You convey traces of pain and loneliness, but mostly hope. You also artfully express strength and determination, as I read "and fly away," telling the reader to move on, rise above, and soar. Nice work.

[Shuvadip Mallik]

As hope is the most powerful energy one can have, that is what fuels up our spirit. And, about 'rising above' ..no explanation needed. :-D

Thank you for your valuable review and effort. Constructive criticisms are always welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful, powerful and strong emotions shared in the poetry. Thank you Shuvadip for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Shuvadip Mallik]

Hello Coyote, it's so nice of you to see that you've got the emotions behind it...
Don't have enough words to show my gratitude ...
Shuvadip

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

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You've to leave the dreamland...as you can't bring that on real...if you can might...then it won't be called dreamland anymore....
All the elaboration of the miraculous place is great to read...thanks for sharing!

[Shuvadip Mallik]

It is exactly like you said.. Dream and real stays exclusive from each other...
It's hard to digest..but still too true...
Thank you for your honest review and your effort.

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Wc😊.....!!!