Balance

Balance

A Poem by Shy Joe

Emotion: Where would you be without
         me?
Logic:          Needless things, need not be.

Emotion: What would you accomplish
         without passion?
Logic:          Intellect needs no such thing to react,
                    and take action.

Emotion: Fun, excitement, love, and
         hate
Are these not what drive
         you?
Logic:          Math, and science are what I dictate.
                    ....but why do I formulate such mindful
                    views?

Logic:          Repetitious  analogizes correlate our
                    relationship.  Never should we
                    separate.
Emotion: Without you, I would have no
         goals. I need you also, I
         suppose.

Logic:           Our quarrel is solved.  Now what do we do?
Emotion:  I am drained.  I bid you adieu!


© 2018 Shy Joe



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and so a union of the two :)
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lol! It's always a battle isn't it ? I think I've heard this in my own head at rimes.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW!! This is quite intriguing as well as interesting. I enjoyed this thought provoking write.

Posted 11 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It's always interesting to see a different form, although it can sometimes dominate the words with its distraction. This form is a perfect match for the words. Love the rhyme too, it adds a nice flow/ rhythm.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great match of emotion and logic. A very exhausting yet engaging conflict!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice very well said. thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A quandary of conflicts emotions vs logic. I like it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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One of my favorite of yours!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very interesting and unique, like a small battle between logic and emotion. I liked this poem! Keep writing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very unique and sneakily captivating, I have enjoyed reading your work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Added on September 22, 2016
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Tags: Stupid, humor, balance, life, emotion, logic

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